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__The magical fountain of age.__

One morning there were two girls that were walking to school. "Good morning Maria!" Erika Edwards said in a loud clear voice. "Good morning Erika," Maria Leblanc replied the girls have known each other since they were two years old and till now they are still best friends. When the two of them got to school maria started to cough. "Are you okay",Erika asked. "Y,yes i am fine thank you." Maria said while coughing. When they got to school maria started to feel woozy and fainted. Everyone in class was shocked. "Maria! Maria!" , Erika yelled. Then the teacher called the ambulance, When the ambulance came they took Maria to the hospital. Erika explained to everyone that "Maria is a very timid girl and ever since she was 5 years old she has had a very weak body" Then after school Erika went to visit Maria at the hospital. Erika asked if maria was feeling better and she answered yes. After a few minutes later Maria's parents came, they were really worried about her. When the doctor came Erika overheard Maria's mother and the doctor talk about maria's health. The doctor said"Maria has some lung problems she can not breath very well sometimes, if this carries on then there is a possibility that she might die." Maria's mother was shocked and said "is there anyway she can be helped?" :there is only one way, she has to have surgury but she cannot have it now because her body is too weak" the doctor replied. "But that is impossible!"Maria's mother yelled. Erika started to worry about Maria and went home to do some reasearch on how kids can become an adult. She researched and researched but could not find any information. Erika got frusterated and yelled "aghhh why cant i find anything on it!!" Suddenly Erika's brother came and asked "whats wrong, why are you screaming?"Erika told her brother that she can not find the information and her brother laughed at her " ofcoarse you cant find any information on it, there is no such thing as making kids grow faster" Erika was frusterated again " well i am going to ask father about that then" Erika then stommped over to her father and asked how kids can become an adult quick. Erika's father started thinking and said " when i was about your age, i went inside the woods and found a magical fountain i was so thirsty that i drank the water and suddenly i grew. But it only lasted for about 2 hours." Erika was really happy and said " Really,i need to get that water now!" The next day Erika started to pack her things and went to the forest. she walked and walked but could not find the fountain.Then she heard a noise it was coming from the bushes, when she turned around to see what it was a cheetah come out! Erika was shocked and backed up, tripped and rolled down a small hill. When she noticed she fell she felt her arm it was brocken. Erika was panicing she did not know what to do, so she walked alittle bit more and moved aside some bushes. Suddenly she saw the magical fountain, she quicly grabed her glass jar and filled it with the water, got out of the woods and ran to the hospital. "Maria! quickly drink this water!" Erika yelled aloud. Maria was shocked "w,what happened to you" she asked. "i will explain later so please drink this water" Erika replied. Maria drank the water and quickly became an adult! Erika called the doctor and told him to make Maria have surgery. 2 hours later Maria was better and the doctor put a cast on Erika's arm

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questions 5. How does the main character change over the course of the story? she changes by thinking that maria is doing fine and then at the end she cares about Maria. 6. Describe the use of Irony in your story. When Erika's brother said that there is no such thing as making kids become adults quicker. There actually was. 7. What symbols are present in your story? The fountain of age water 8. What is the theme of your story? Friendship